tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post8842812881565409932..comments2023-09-03T02:28:53.448-06:00Comments on MRBunderson: Editing IssuesM.R.Bundersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11944957660074787707noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post-83113442943183871792010-04-18T13:11:25.726-06:002010-04-18T13:11:25.726-06:00This is the subtle one my daughter found.
Page 16...This is the subtle one my daughter found.<br /><br />Page 166, Tori kisses Eric's hand and experiences sensory overload. When they talk about it later, page 230, they got it backwards.M.R.Bundersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944957660074787707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post-42957852670524525202010-04-18T12:48:03.690-06:002010-04-18T12:48:03.690-06:00This in from Vanesa, (thanks):
page 54, paragraph ...This in from Vanesa, (thanks):<br />page 54, paragraph 7, Eric is talking to Tori but addresses his comments to Amanda.<br /><br />Should read: "Tori," he said gently, "Let me finish."M.R.Bundersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944957660074787707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post-82091232522787381732010-04-15T12:23:01.263-06:002010-04-15T12:23:01.263-06:00Thanks Kelly.Thanks Kelly.M.R.Bundersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944957660074787707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post-2634506226725870622010-04-06T21:47:39.617-06:002010-04-06T21:47:39.617-06:00Her mom never agrees to the college tour. I also n...Her mom never agrees to the college tour. I also noticed a missing period but can't find it now. It was somewhere in the middle;)Kelly Brysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08324622421797199560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post-18276233869669183112010-03-28T23:37:53.630-06:002010-03-28T23:37:53.630-06:00Fun idea, Marilyn.Fun idea, Marilyn.Ronda Gibb Hinrichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03504581218342122865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1307088976935395913.post-69407158586828390822010-03-27T18:06:47.724-06:002010-03-27T18:06:47.724-06:00I'll start with the most GLARING ones.
Page 1...I'll start with the most GLARING ones. <br />Page 199<br />"And Eric will be there visiting there,...<br />Should read: "And Eric will be there visiting,...<br /><br />With my with my face showing...<br />Should read: With my face showing...<br /><br />My daughter pointed another error out but I'm not sure any of you will catch it so though I have made note of it I'll not mention it...yet. It's a consistency error. Can you find it???M.R.Bundersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944957660074787707noreply@blogger.com